Thread: Life's Illusion
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Old 13-12-2007, 11:49 AM
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Re: Life's Illusion

I liked the idea of the story but I think another page would have gone a long way to clear a few things up. Clues, for example, of why he was there before his memory returned. "Who was this girl in the locket I held in my hand. I should have known her, I was certain of that, but how?"

I really like the end. Oldest trick in pysch torture, make them think they've escaped!

All in all, a very entertaining concept presented well. Thanks for sharing.
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