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Re: A Painful Life
hehehe...silly me, I thought your icon's signature line was part of the story. Now I se why it didn't make sense...
As to the story, I feel it moved way too fast. There was no time to develop anything but the very surface aspects of the main character let alone her best friend that she just iced. With a little more character development even the most old hat themes can be a fun read.
I'm looking forward to reading some more of you stuff too. Thanks for sharing.
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