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Originally Posted by SeaN
hey man, welcome to the site.
Honestly, the flow and rhythm here is darn near flawless. Nicely done- I enjoyed reading it, though I'm afraid there are many dimensions of meaning that I were lost on me. I believe I understand the overall message though, and I took it as a positive one.
Very interesting form, good stuff. Keep writing!
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Thank you very much! It actually came about shortly after changing my spiritual focus from a Christian one to one more pagan. I found that some of the pagan folk I was meeting were just about as intolerant of the Christians as some Christians were of them. Mind you, these folk are the exception rather than the rule on both sides of the theological line. So this was my plea to both to stop focusing on the things that make us different and celebrate the things that our two philosophies had in common. So yeah, I think it was a positive message I was going for.
This is the first time I've shared my poetry, most of which is of pagan principles, on a site that was not specifically designed for pagans. Thanks again for giving it a read and I have been made to feel very welcome here!