I very much like the subject matter and the way you addressed how embracing ones faith is a major part of ones growing to adulthood. In some places, the pace and rhythm seems just a bit off to me but I'm sure it's just the way I was reading it.
My favorite line:
"If childhood were a revolution,
Then the protest is where I began."
Love the imagery of childhood being a rebellion against growing up.
Least favorite:
"Have you not made Christ your remedy?
Why does your faith hide behind your cries?"
This is the part where the flow seemed to stumble just a bit.
Thanks for sharing.