[Venomous Vixen]

Wow, there is a lot in this one.. I thought in the first few lines you were going somewhere completely different with this but you really surprised me here. Brought me back to so many places, everytime I have seen writing on walls and wondered who the people were, did they make it, where were they now. Oh and then the last stanza, the wound healing and opening and healing again, so perfectly captured the way young love and lust feels... seriously really blew me away there. I love the way it feels as if you are almost going to fall off course in your writing and then just as you are going "uh oh" you pull the reader right back on track again and reinforce everything you started out with... making it all wrapped up in a package of stuff that really gets you thinking. Anyway, am rambling, this one is one of my favorites out of you lately.