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Old 16-12-2007, 12:28 AM
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Re: Darkness

Well done. Very descriptive. I really didn't notice it dragging anywhere. When "she" opens her mouth and says, "She's not in here anymore," I had a very cinematic image in my mind (and I almost wet my pants!). Chilling. This would make a very nice segment of a horror anthology film.
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