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Old 16-12-2007, 12:41 AM
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Re: Your Words

LOVED this stanza:

"Fabric's coming undone
Woven to keep you out
You
Tugging the threads
Spiraling my life again
With your words"

For me just conjurs up so much right at the beginning of the piece, and i think you can really draw different meanings from it. "Woven to keep you out"; I initially though of it as a creative kind of subconscious 'id' character escaping into consciousness through the unweaving of social conformity. lol. See, different meanings.

Great, keep writing.
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