First some typos I encountered:
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But that’s is another story.
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Typo.
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Past that, no one had the guts to fill in History’s job.
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I reckon you meant "Post"
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That caused the rest of Earth to be very angry with God, and vice verse
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versa?
Now that that's out of the way, I'll comment on the piece. What I liked about it is that it's completely random, and I like random. However, I still find something missing somehow. Some of the ideas you expressed are extremely memorable, like the idea of God creating the Earth as a science fare project, and getting second prize because he made man in his own image - that was priceless. Good job. I just also want to remind you that I'm not very good at finding and reading new stuff that's submitted on the site, so please send me a PM when you publish something new that you would like for me to read
