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Old 17-12-2007, 12:40 AM
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Re: The Struggle of Fiu

Good morning. I just joined and am working my way through some great stories.

I like how this one is very conversation and interaction based. I noticed one of the comments was about the quotation marks around what was supposed to be in italics to show they were Kazuki's own thoughts, his "inside" voice

I'll hunt down the rest of the story if it's here. Thanks for sharing.
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