[Venomous Vixen]

The poem itself is a beauty, but I am not fond of your use of punctuation personally. The way you begin and end each stanza really turns my eyes off continue, seems like an end before a beginning. Also, I tend to use italics rather than ( ) as a second voice, something more pleasing to my eyes and it does not impede the flow but rather easily allows the reader to adjust to the change. These are all personal preferences to me, and the way I like to read things but just minor observations. Grammatically and content wise I really have nothing negative to say, you captured and carried through the idea flawlessly in my opinion. Great to have you around and again, welcome.