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Old 17-12-2007, 05:36 AM
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Re: Redwoods

Not your usual form here and yet it worked, like the tall unbroken trunk of a redwood. It almost made me feel guilty for having the pleasure of growing up in these trees myself, and everytime wondering how many others had stood before the same tree. I liked the comparison to the schoolmaster and the way they stand erect against the sky, perfect words for such ominous trees... and yet it is true they can be reduced to almost nothing... nice perspective. The personal touch at the end was what struck the most, tugged at the heart a bit that you were possibly missing someone and remembering as you stood before the tree. Anyway, another great one.
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