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Idea very beautifully and poetically stated. I also love how you've started with "the ending" and ended with "the beginning"; it gives the piece a nice, circular feel. Very good choice. ^_^ I only have one criticsm that hasn't already been brought up (and it's a pretty small one). In stanza one line 5, the line break between "warm" and "air" seemed to me to disrupt the flow. Of course, it's entirely up to you. Anyways, thanks very much for a lovely piece and welcome to SM!