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Old 17-12-2007, 09:09 AM
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Re: A Vivisection of Loneliness and its Reason

I often use line breaks to point out double-meanings that I think are imporant. On that line that you pointed out, the line break draws your attention to "warm" as well as "warm air." The intention is to give the reader the impression that the wong is filtered by the metaphorical warmth of friendship or love, as well as the fact that it is physically filtered by the warm air.
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