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Old 18-12-2007, 02:12 AM
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Re: Merry Christmas to Storiesmania!

Hey Masa.
Tell me something... did you really enjoy writing this?
The thing is, as I was reading it, I just felt like there was a certain enjoyment in your words. The sentences you created, and the paragraphs you set up by your sentence arrangement, and your choice of words - it all seems to be one big happy smile

There are just a few grammatical (or other such) grammatical glitches. When I have the time, I will make a longer post to point them out, but for now, let this stand and spread some Christmas cheer.
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