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Re: Justice
Ferris! Where the hell have you been hiding out? I would love to get this up for you, you know the drill, a few comments and then I can get it posted.
One thing, the flow seemed to falter a bit after the first four stanzas. You may consider a comma after "Again" in the next line to keep the reader pausing like before... and maybe somehow work that into the rest of the piece.
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