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Re: Justice
I wish I could pick the real meaning behind the first half of the poem. I have a nagging feeling in the back of my head that there's something more to it than just a random account of love, rule, killing, etc. I also wonder at the God, and how He is thrown up in here, up in here. Holy War, maybe? Or is it an account or view on some historical event I should probably remember? The Crusades? The American Revolution? For God and one's country, yeah? I don't even know. Odds are you just liked how it sounded and rolled with it, and I'm looking too hard.
The ending half was very well done, I thought. I particularly liked the way you tacked on 'And wound in revenge'. A clever touch. On the whole, well done.
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Originally Posted by Theru
Really, Serac, if you weren't so lofty and I weren't already taken, I would definitely want to marry you. (Or maybe... one-night-stand you. You're not very good husband material, I think.)
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