Classy. It had a simple rhyming scheme and stuck to it, even if one or two of the words didn't exactly rhyme. It was a good switch up how you made the first night a 'bad' night, but the second a good. I went through it a second time to try and find what was the main difference between the two nights. It seemed to me that the good night focused on family, whereas the bad night focused on.....not family. Mistress is mentioned, after all. Though, a mother and her child are also mentioned in the bad night, which basically makes my theory pointless and likely incorrect. If ever you feel the need to elaborate, by all means do so.
