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Re: The Curse (Chapter 1)
Real pleased you liked ebookguru 
I am going to address this chapter very soon – i will pay particular attention to sentances – great point from jay. At the same time to include minor skirmish with baddy character and supply a reference to what lady means in this world and usage of term.
Rena thank you for your thoughts and encouraging comments; The question regarding term lady in regards to this world was an excellent point. You know i hadn’t even really thought that bit out – but after a little reflection think i have come up with an adequate, simple solution – i shall write this in with the conflict bit...will post when i do.
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Time; an elusive element to a creative mind. For the story burns to be expressed, flooding the mind, seeking an outlet. Red brimmed eyes and dark circles fore-tells a deeper story, echoed in a mirrors reflection. - my story.
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