Thread: The Distilling War
View Single Post
  #9 (permalink)  
Old 14-02-2008, 11:23 AM
Achele's Avatar
Achele Achele is offline
Regular Reader
  
Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: Northwest
Posts: 28
Total Points: 256.00
Achele is getting to know his way around
Re: The Distilling War
ea,

Just finished reading this, didn't drag a bit. I didn't read it before the rewrite--so can't do a comparison.

Quote:
His sensitive taste buds had gone on strike and refused to taste it any longer
Loved that, good visual.
__________________
Achele
Reply With Quote