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Old 17-02-2008, 03:15 AM
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Re: The Tale of Lizzy Booger

Hi,

I liked this story in all, but I felt that the bit at the beginning where you explained how much you hate snot was unnecessary. The story didn't really need that, you can take it for granted that noone likes it!

Also, I would have liked some indication further on as to whether you were a male or female.

I was eating a sandwich reading this story and it made me feel sick and want to stop eating!!!
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