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Re: [sic] - Part I
Since you say "part 1," I hope more parts are coming?
Good start - holds the interest. Has a sort of "shoot from the hip" style which gives it immediacy. It sounds as though you're sitting down chatting with someone, which is what you want to go for with this type of piece. Nicely done.
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