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Old 19-02-2008, 09:38 PM
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Re: Found

This is probably my favourite poem of yours. At times simple and yet so very beautiful. Funny enough it reminds me of Ireland lol not least because you chose to have a four leaf clover in there.

My favourite line is

Like an orange falling from an apple tree,
he found me when I least expected;

love the way you used this to convey suprise and un-expectancy.

Beautiful, babe.
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