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Re: Kindergarten Cannibals (Part 1)
"He was a bit hungry too,"
If I have one criticism, its that the phrase above seems a bit simplistic and basic, especially since it comes after a brilliantely descriptive passage. Also, the bit about eating chipmunk shit seems a bit silly in the context of dark humour. But thats just a personal thing. Other than that, it was hilariously dark slice of goodness. Well done, have a gold star
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