Thread: Three Seasons
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Old 20-02-2008, 05:00 AM
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Re: Three Seasons
Good stuff, but it reads more like a poem than song lyrics. maybe some sort of chorus between each verse would help, it could make each verse/season more distinct and also create more of a song like vibe, ya dig?
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