[Achele]

Thanks, I caught a few more spacing errors to and tweeked a sentence or two, but nothing major.

I did keep one thing though, call it author's creative liceance (and it might cause mine to be revoked), but I kept the quote below the way it was. The hyphen because drawn-up is one movement and the comma because it--in my view--mimics the movement of drawing the sheet over Bella's face.

[quote]Margo breathed as the blue sheet was drawn-up, over the lifeless face. She watched the orderlies reverently transfer the body to a gurney and then slowly wheel toward the door.[quote]

Thanks BTLOTM for your catches. Nits or not, I want to know.