Thread: Her Doll
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Old 21-02-2008, 02:56 AM
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Re: Her Doll
It falls into line with the message of someone suffering. The heart is whole, but jagged. And the awkward rhyming was on purpose. This isn't a true rhyming piece, or technically true poetry either.
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