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the hollow laugh of irony
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and that is why I love you so much... hah well your poetry I mean. Without fail you have at least one mind blowing line in each piece... this was my favorite here.
The poem on a whole was, for lack of a better word, disturbing and unnerving. Perhaps you would have to be someone who has been in an abusive situation to really understand what you have captured here, the association with things and the memories they bring back, and the way you feel afterwards.
The concept... the soap and the smell, and the tobacco was fantastic! Almost like turning into what you hate, maybe hanging on to hate and abuse shapes us that way, who knows. Anyhow now I am off on my famous ramble.. I will spare you and leave it at this was awesome!