[McCoy]

I found the overall idea of this story quite good, really interesting. However, there are a few points that kinda bugged me a little.

For instance, what was the red powder she slipped in his drink? You never mentioned that.

You say that she drugged him at the airport and dragged him from there all the way to the airport? That doesn´t sound all that believable to be honest, and the fact that they´re at the local beach at the height of summer, so you would imagine that someone would stumble upon them eventually, or he would at least hear the cars or see the boats or the people in the sea, plus she would probably be caught pretty soon for using his credit card all over town, especially after buying a Ferrari.

As I said, overall it´s a decent idea, just a few points you might want to look over