Thread: I Wish I Had Hump
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Old 23-02-2008, 01:09 PM
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Question Re: I Wish I Had Hump
Are you sure a period is warranted after…

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Or if my middle tooth went missing ?
Seems maybe a comma or nothing at all.?

And maybe after
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…you ask(rather another comma not a period.)?
What about after
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…hump on my back ?
A very imaginative write.
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