[niamhoneill]

Hi Mc Coy,

Thanks for your comments.

Firstly, I didn't see the point in having to explain further what the red powder is. I assume the reader has a decent level of intelligence to understand that after I have said the MC wants to drug him and that she puts something into his drink and that it makes him go all hazy, that it is a drug!!

Also, perhaps I didn't make it clear enough but the MC had a car, which is mentioned in the story and it is suggested that she dragged him from that, not from the airport, I thought this was clear, maybe not.

The story only spans over a short time and she had sectioned off the beach with tape so people wouldn't come snooping, not very believable I know, but really the whole story isn't very believable.

Lastly, she didn't buy the farrari, the acquired it from the man she married, which is explained in detail.