Thread: Company Clown
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Old 25-02-2008, 11:19 AM
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Re: Company Clown

you use your dialects in a very effective way. it´s an interesting read and an enjoyable story as well, interesting form you use too. I agree with what´s been said though, maybe adding some descriptions would add to the quality of it. good job
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