[McCoy]

Thanks for the comments. the thing with the wedding was that I was going for the shock effect, but I do see how I could work that out a bit better. I like your idea of having Roger in the crowd at the wedding, maybe just mention that she gets nervous when she sees a familiar face. I´ve also kinda juggled with the idea of having Roger visit her instead of sending her that note, maybe go on a bit about how she ruined his life when she called his wife that last night. I agree that I need to give further detail about Alice´s struggle in the street, her life with Dylan, and to develop Dylan more.