Re: Cold Cellar
I thought I had commented on this early but…
I thought maybe you could introduce your character walking the halls of the asylum, flipping through Mr. Stulks’ file reviewing his history. And then move to his fighting or anxious state in his cell or corridor? As she “observes” him she remembering why she became what she is and then opening the door…And this my first day at Westwood Mental Institution…
It has a good start but it could be more and leading into something even greater...
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Right, I'll keep to the present but just take a glance at the past. Damn, is this poetry?
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