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Re: A preface to a suspense nove.
Ambrose,
Thanks for the comments. They are very, very insightful, especially the bit about forcing the voice. You're exactly right.
Just to give you a little background: I did write this as a preface to Sons. I reluctantly pulled it after four previous readers all made comments similar to yours: they said it was unnecessary, confusing and perhaps even a bit annoying.
Okay, okay. I get it.
Thanks again.
Allo
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