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Re: The Curse (Chapter 1)
Changes have now been made....hope reads better now 
In bold - introduction of baddy and explanation of title 'Lady' - did like this as easier to see. If any1 prefers other version etc ...have saved ...let me know what think.
thanks all
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Time; an elusive element to a creative mind. For the story burns to be expressed, flooding the mind, seeking an outlet. Red brimmed eyes and dark circles fore-tells a deeper story, echoed in a mirrors reflection. - my story.
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