I really liked this. There were some killer sentences in there ...
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The speedometer’s needle flirted with eighty.
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The night squeezed in on both sides, infinitely more menacing than it had been earlier.
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and a few others I should have plucked out while reading but seem to have lost now.
You know, it is slightly predictable but it does not matter, it was very good. You have a definite way with language and I look forward to more from you!