[marty2shorty]

Fantastic story! I love the fact that you did not use the word vampire the whole story.
Best vampire story I've read.
I also love that you told the story with only one line of dialog.
The images thrown into my head were detailed. I actually got scared reading this at night and thinking of someone tapping on my window.
Points for scaring me, turning me on, and telling a good story.
Thank you A_Story_Teller.