[Verbalcody]

This is an interesting piece to say the least. I particularly like the bit where you find out he enjoyed killing the girl. 'the blood was amazing to look at' that's a pretty powerful line right there. To mention I am a huge Bowie and Nirvana fan so that nod was pretty cool too. Well done, but needs work as mentioned above. As well, a double way mirror I don't think that term exists. I know you meant a two way mirror, and I googled it just to be sure I may be wrong but I don't think double way mirror is the right name.

anyway thanks for this