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Old 28-02-2008, 02:16 PM
Verbalcody Verbalcody is offline
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Re: A Few Moments in the Life of Senator Dan Snail

this is TOO funny. I mean, I loved the lemmings one, but this one is TOO damned funny. I don't know the requirements of being in the advanced writing section but this should be there.

I don't know about the line my and my colleagues (I would like to express my and my colleague’s extreme appreciation) this may be the correct wording, but it sounded funny. My colleagues and I would like to express, I believe, is more appropriate. That is if you're even concerned about a touch up.

Anyway this is brilliant and thank you for sharing you have a unique sense of humour and a voice people at the learning to write level usually don't develop. Even if it is a bit childish (and its my favorite part)

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