Thread: The Rainbow, in shades of grey
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Old 28-02-2008, 04:34 PM
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Well this is definitely something new to these old eyes.

I loved reflecting/gintcelfer. I do hope that I rewrote that properly.

At first and four reads I thought “what the?” Then read five, seven more times more and thought brilliant. For me personally I think putting the dialogue/speech into quotations wouldn’t have hurt the form either. It might even give something even more dramatic. But of course this is only one opinion.
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