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Re: Man Friday
yes, this was a funny story, but it seemed much too rushed in parts, and not because you wanted to write it like that, but because it needed more description. I agree with McCoy in some of the unbelievable things about Dan and the whole beach incident, but I guess that was for the laughs. Oh, and I really wanted to punch Sally in the face. Just sayin'.
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