[Ambrose]

I have to say, I'm fairly impressed with this one. You have the voice of a seasoned writer, and you sound like you know your stuff when it comes to music. I myself am musically illiterate, so I cannot comment on that aspect of the story. I did however appreciate the lyrics being thrown in and the veracity of the music speak. It sounded genuine. Really Vorcla, I can't say enough how professional this piece rings. This is publishable stuff. Anyway, I eagerly look forward to the next piece. You've created some truly interesting characters and I'm wondering if this story comes part from a segment of your own life?