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Re: FALLEN ANGEL (a story with not a werewolf or vampire in sight!)
I love this story. I was actually thinking about it earlier today and I think you've done a really great job with the characterization here. Very little had to be explained and a lot was gained just through behavior. I love seeing that. I also totally had a literary crush on Henderson until he slept with Ali. Oh well, all good things end. Keep it up.
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It started out as a feeling
Which then grew into a hope
Which then turned into a quiet thought
Which then turned into a quiet word
And then that word grew louder and louder
Til it was a battle cry
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