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Re: Catching Santa
Not bad, Kep. Something you could sit down and read to the kiddies. A good story, but I don't feel that it is up to par with your usual stuff. You generally write like painters paint. Very visual. I didn't think this was as visual as some of your other stuff, but I did like it. Keep up the good work!
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GO VOTE ON A CHALLENGE OR WE'LL TATTOO THIS  ON YOUR FOREHEAD!
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Oh...you...you...you BIG BAD WOLF! Bad girl! You go potty on the paper! BAD Girl!!!
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