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Old 04-03-2008, 01:51 AM
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Re: Rising Up

You've created a very stong narratorial voice, definately empowering as VV said.

In relation to content, it kind of felt overall a bit cliche man-hating, but when i though about it more, it's perfectly valid (not sayin that it needs my validation!) a deifnitely still evident in society.

At the top of every heirarchy there's always a man.
He's always white.
He's always has incredible wealth.
He's always heterosexual.

I only tick two of those four boxes lol
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