[Venomous Vixen]

I look forward to seeing this flushed out a bit more though I must say, as is, I was impressed. You have some incredible images in there (perhaps it is true, poets have a natural knack for prose and painting those images). I would have liked to have seen more of the characters from the beginning pop in throughout, as they played on stage, commentary on the music maybe? Anyhow. Well done, good spin on an old tale!