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Old 06-03-2008, 03:21 AM
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Re: The Human Touch - Part 5 & 6 (last)

I can’t believe I never commented first time I read this story. Such a poignant story, so in tune with human nature and our needs. Perfectly portrayed N1, and something which could be developed further if you wished.
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