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Old 06-03-2008, 02:03 PM
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Re: Milk

I kinda agree, the ending is a bit blah, but I liked it anyway, didn´t care about the cursing, mostly because I curse all the time I guess. the only suggestion I could give is for you to add a little bit of info about the characters, who are talking together? just a tiny bit of info that I think would make this a little bit better. it would make a good scene in a movie
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