07-03-2008, 02:27 AM
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Bri's Dark Angel
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Join Date: Dec 2007
Posts: 2,963
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Re: A journey through Tassels.
Nice. Your humor is consistent throughout; nice and dry and droll. You do a good job with your descriptions, as Fire noted. I don't think the ending was too abrupt, and I like the little twist.
Overall, nice job. 
Rick
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