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Re: A journey through Tassels.
I found this one witty and clever. It is funny to step into another world, not by reading about fairies and goblins but by reading about how an "heiress" may feel. I think you captured it well, and even the tantrum and charade she put up, I could believe all of it.
I am still absorbing the end. I know realistically this is probably what would have happened, and she would have forgotten the lesson she was on the brink of and gone back into her routine as the pretty little daughter of someone important but, ah somehow it felt wrong. It would have been nice to see her challenge the man sitting across from her on jobs and working... he could still fall in love with her for her spirit... perhaps I think too much of people lol.
Regardless, well done and some great stuff in there!
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